“ ahhhh what daXXX” screamed the fist
police as he saw the corpse hidden pelow the floor, how dare they mock me like
this? They already knew what is happening and now are mocking me by acting
astonished.
How dare they? I will a madmen have figured
out this scheme? “get that guy to the police car NOW!” ordered the police officer.
Laughing, I was dragged away into the police car. I have gotten rid of the eye!
I am now free! the beating sound of the heart began to fade away as we get further
away from the house. the policemen sitting from the front seat looked awkwardly
back at me as if I am a madmen. A MADMEN!! How absurd ! how does that thought
even occur to him? “my senses are sharpened!” I shouted at the officer, “sharpened,
I say!”. The policeman’s eyes widened and turned around abruptly. I got thrown
off into a jail after 20 minuits of awkward silence. The new cell was nice, I
got a bunkmate named Brandon, he was a generally nice guy, he got thrown into
jail because he tried to stab a guy in the street, but his eyes! They are soo
cold, just like the old man’s………
Hey Steven,
ReplyDeleteI looked at your blog post and I really liked it. It was very funny, especially with your comedic addition to the original author's style. I also liked your twist ending.